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The Battle of Singapore was fought in the South-East Asian theatre of World War II when the Empire of Japan invaded the Allied stronghold of Singapore. The fighting in Singapore lasted from Frebruary 7 1942 to February 15 1942.

The Japanese troops invaded Singapore and battled with the British soldiers. Unfortunately, Singapore had a lack of defences. The British soldiers fought hard to beat the Japanese but they were outnumbered.

For eight days the battle went on. The British soldiers were weak as British sent the untrained and lack of experience soldiers over to Singapore. They kept their better soldiers there as they were also having a war. Therefore Singapore fell into the Japanese on February 15 1942. Percival surrended Singapore to the Japanese.

From then on, life in Singapore had changed.

Page 1. [sunarsih]
Picture: British Soldiers.
Article: World War 2. (Japan & British)

Page 2. [Julia]
Picture: Left Adnan bin Saidi
Article: Profile about him. Start with “ Many heroes sacrificed their lives in WW2. One of them is… Left Adnan Bin Saidi.

Page 3. [Nicholas]
Picture: Malay Regiment.
Article: profile about malay regiment & what they had done.

Page 4 & 5. [weihoon & Derek]
Picture: weapons used during WW2 & soldiers fighting.
Article: the Battle of Bukit Chandu.

Page 6. [Kang Ling]
Picture: malay regiment & adnan being hang on trees.
Article: The Japanese tortured the malay regiment. “ Death Before Dishonour”

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Adnan’s ship was sunk by the Japanese soldiers.

Adnan was shot, but he continued fighting. After the battle was lost, Adnan was taken as a prisoner by the Japanese soldiers. He was later hung on a rubber tree, and was bayoneted to death.

Adnan caught the disguised Indian troops’ marching error. 

When Singapore surrendered, the Japanese kempeitai tried but did not succeed to find and murder Adnan’s family in revenge for what happened in Bukit Chandu.

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