Comments and Suggestion

11 03 2008

You should also do something on E.Choy to compare the two and how heroism need not mean fighting as a soldier.

Plenty of resources here – esp audio clips of E.Choy and Photos

http://library.thinkquest.org/C002071/media.html

Comments:

  • I don’t see much interaction here or even posting of feedback or ideas and response to ideas.  There is very LITTLE evidence of discussion amongst group members.

    You would know if you have read my email about the rubrics that MARKS are given for this and you WILL LOSE a lot of marks if you DON’T IMPROVE this blog asap.

  • I also don’t see individual post on reflections on learning so far, like based on trip, course, research done so far.  This reflection is VERY IMPT – SHOW your THINKING and ability to use knowledge and skills from different subjects ( Eng Multiliteracies like visual literacy, photo journalism , video and storyboarding skills and use of language to tell a story, to explain, to persuade , to influence others point of view /emotions etc and History knowledge and SKILLS of inference, reliability etc)
  • Your references to research is still lacking – especially DIFFERENT TYPES of evidence – i need to see INFERENCE skills from different sources like the books I passed you – where are the QUOTES that are relevant and personal reflection on this with you doing a PEEL on it?
  • Your mindmap is fine BUT why isn’t there any feedbaack – I don’t see EVIDENCE of thinking more deeply on what you are doing esp with focus on the topic – what else do you think you would need to find out? what you are interested to know more abt? What are some questions you have?